如何寫(xiě)勸說(shuō)性建議信

【審題要素】

      寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意下面幾點(diǎn)：

1. 確定文體：這是一篇應(yīng)用文，是學(xué)生熟悉的書(shū)信，寫(xiě)作中應(yīng)注意書(shū)信的常規(guī)格式。

2. 主體時(shí)態(tài)：文章應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。

3. 主體人稱：由于是給別人提出建議，所以人稱應(yīng)該以第二人稱為主。

4. 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：①問(wèn)題介紹；②建議一；③建議二；④建議三；⑤我的愿望。

5. 注意恰當(dāng)使用連接詞，使各個(gè)要點(diǎn)之間邏輯連貫，行文通順。

【思路引導(dǎo)】

           首先，回應(yīng)來(lái)信中提出的問(wèn)題，并分析原因。

      其次，針對(duì)該問(wèn)題，提出2-3條合理的建議并說(shuō)明理由。

      最后，寫(xiě)一兩句結(jié)束語(yǔ)，如：希望我的建議對(duì)你有幫助等等。

【語(yǔ)言積累】

       1. Introduction:

       I’m sorry (that) you are having trouble / difficulty / problems in making friends.

       I know you are now having trouble communicating with others, and you may often feel lonely.

       I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on ...

       However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you. / Here are a few suggestions.

       I think you can make it if you follow the advice below.

       2. Ideas & Reasons:

       First(ly), why not ...? If you do this, ...

       Secondly, you should / can ... Then / That way, ...

       Thirdly, it would be a good idea if ... By doing this, ...

       Last but not least (最后但并不是最不重要的) ...

       3. Conclusion:

       I hope you will find these ideas useful.

       As time goes on, people will know you better and will like to make friends with you if you can follow the above.

       I hope what’s mentioned above might be helpful  ...

       I believe that if you follow my advice, you’ll get along well with your classmates.

       I believe, with your determination, you can manage to overcome these difficulties.

【參考范文】

Dear Xiao Dong,

       I’m sorry you are having trouble in making friends. However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you.

       Firstly, why not take an active part in discussions? If you do this, you can express your own opinions, and at the same time, learn to listen to other people’s views.

       Secondly, you should learn about your classmates’ likes and dislikes. Then you can find common interests with them. In this way, you can get to know more different people and show them that you are friendly.

       Last but not least, I’m always here ready to help. We can take part in some activities together and I can introduce you to others.

       I hope you will find these ideas useful.

                                                        Yours sincerely,

                                                        Miss Wang

     通過(guò)學(xué)習(xí)這篇寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)，你掌握了如何寫(xiě)勸說(shuō)性建議信的方法了嗎？試著寫(xiě)一下吧，然后與范文加以對(duì)照，找出其中的不足并加以改進(jìn)。

 GUIDED WRITING

我們?yōu)槭裁匆獙W(xué)英語(yǔ)？

【審題要素】

      根據(jù)海報(bào)所寫(xiě)的短文要求針對(duì)某個(gè)現(xiàn)象（或問(wèn)題）發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)并陳述理由。從文體上看，屬于議論文范疇。提筆前需考慮哪個(gè)觀點(diǎn)或理由有更多的內(nèi)容可寫(xiě)。此外，此類文章常常談?wù)摰氖?b>現(xiàn)在的情況，所以時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。行文類似于英語(yǔ)演講稿的形式，所以主體人稱應(yīng)為第一人稱。

【思路引導(dǎo)】

      第一步：先設(shè)計(jì)“Why should we learn English?”的海報(bào)。海報(bào)的寫(xiě)作方式如下：

      1. Why should we learn English? 作標(biāo)題，位于海報(bào)的正中間。

      2. 接下來(lái)列出學(xué)英語(yǔ)的理由（可與同學(xué)討論，多列幾條）。

      3. 最后寫(xiě)結(jié)論。

      第二步：根據(jù)海報(bào)內(nèi)容所寫(xiě)的短文屬于議論文。此類文章謀篇布局時(shí)應(yīng)注意以下幾個(gè)步驟：

      1. 開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山提出問(wèn)題或看法。

      2. 列出至少三條合理的理由或原因（根據(jù)海報(bào)所給要點(diǎn)來(lái)寫(xiě)）。

      3. 作出總結(jié)，呼應(yīng)首段（也可提出個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)及理由）。

     【海報(bào)寫(xiě)作的注意事項(xiàng)】

      1. 英文海報(bào)主題應(yīng)該明確、一目了然。它的內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)明扼要，形式新穎美觀。海報(bào)要求用最少的文字包含最多的信息，因此海報(bào)多用省略句、縮略語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)等等。

      2. 為進(jìn)一步增強(qiáng)海報(bào)的醒目性，一些重要信息常常分行來(lái)寫(xiě)，并且在其前面用粗點(diǎn)、星號(hào)等特殊符號(hào)加以強(qiáng)調(diào)，有時(shí)還配有圖片以增加吸引力。

【議論文寫(xiě)作常用表達(dá)】

       As a student, I am strongly in favor of the decision. （表明自己的觀點(diǎn)）

       The reasons for this may be listed as follows. （過(guò)渡句，承上啟下）

       First of all, ... Secondly, ... Besides, ... （列出2-3個(gè)贊成或反對(duì)的理由）

       In conclusion, I believe that ... （結(jié)論）

【參考范文】

1. Poster

WHY SHOULD WE LEARN ENGLISH?

Reasons for learning English:

★one of the main international official languages

★to talk to native speakers

★to read English books

★widely used in most countries

★one of the main subjects in exams

★important in international business

So learning English is important, and we should try our best to master it.

2. One possible version:

Why should we learn English?

       InChinanearly every student learns English but it is still worth asking — why? There are many reasons.

       English is important to a successful education; it is almost impossible to get into a key university without a high standard in English. In addition, English is now the language of the business world so an ability to speak and write English fluently is important to one’s career. A third reason is that there are many beautiful works of literature written in English, which can give the reader a great deal of pleasure.

       There is no doubt that learning English is important and we should try our best to master it.

      通過(guò)學(xué)習(xí)這篇寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)，你掌握了英語(yǔ)海報(bào)及議論文的寫(xiě)作方法了嗎？試著寫(xiě)一下吧，然后與范文加以對(duì)照，找出其中的不足并加以改進(jìn)。